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I think communication skills are the most improtant skill for a business leader to have.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most of all, employees can work more efficiently and productively.

In my case, when I was working the first job, the leader has communication skills. And the I can work more efficiently and productively.

And they can make a friendly atmosphere.

So I think communication skills are the most important skill for a business leader to have.

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